This serious topic.
Long Kai Hua of the 《future 》 wrote a student of unbearable studies heavy burden to try to commit suicide in the beginning.This is similar to many breathtaking science fiction stories, the beginning is a life and death physical fight, all for holding tight a reader.
A writer says:Write an article, from the first words beginning be for there being a good coda.
Another writer says:The story wants around****Come to weave.
"For the sake of the good coda" and"around****", Is all reasonable.Also want to weave according to the demand of story in addition.
So, is the story in the science fiction how to flow to move?Before speak of "two hearts"s to keep jumping about, push details development.But"development" and the method for"flow"ing has a dissimilarity.
A kind of that time flows, for example 《devil triangle and UFO 》 , it is according to the sequence in time to tell a story.
A kind of is the space flows, for example 《the stars in time immemorial 》《have no the distance of answer 》 is an appearance and a little bit hand over to treat time, flow to move.
Still having is other of"flow", for example press"streams of consciousness novel" that the fluxion of the person's subjective consciousness creates.
Tell a story, also need one the best describe angle.
What is the best angle?Raise an example:Formerly, there is one being an one-eyed person and being lame the king of leg, the painter makes uniform a portrait painting for him.The first painter draws him into double eyes brightly for beautifying him, is inspecting the great man of honor guard in the awe-inspiring.Result, the king kills off a painter, because the king thinks that these is the irony to him and Xie to read.The second painter absorbed to teach and shone on to actually draw to be lame the one-eyed person that the leg walks with a cane, the king isn't happy either, and then kill off a painter, because the king doesn't wish to admit he or she thus difficult see.The third used some kind of brainses very much and drew king into the posture(want to shut an eyes naturally) that presents arms to take aim at, while a leg tramples on a piece of rock.(can not tell naturally he a leg is short)The king saw in high glee, because it is true and covered up own blemish.This painter obviously and pretty much the tactful is smart, skillfully designed the best angle of king's carriage.This story to creations science fiction how strive for a layout, don't don't inspire.
Describe angle to still have a pass what corpus examine, the observation face of the whole of problem, namely usually the description person said call.
Generally while telling a story, less use 2 people to call description, unless develop a certain stage in the story, is handed over by the someone to need a details, meet such as"he" what matter is how to think and etc. for doing.In fact, that is only "turning to say".Moreover, in some lyric poetries, have you how, you how of describe, that is the easy to author to keep expressing chest Yi.
3 people call again and again "all-powerful angle".It in a short while can let the business that you speak taking place in the space, in a short while can let how the radar station that you hand over to stay in in the ground act, this kind of angle is very free.For example 《is cold of balance 》 , start writing airship the top discovered to smuggle, smuggle be captured, is a young girl.For the sake of the "balance", the young girl will be "sentence to death"-toss in the space.The pilot of airship thinks that the square tried to let young girl and his elder brother's words-added to hand over to treat his elder brother to wait for helping of airship, be placed in a dangerous situation.Chase environment(a airship in the space) like this, host male relationship with her elder brother, orderly make a show of in front of reader.Especially the younger sister will be "sentence to death" of the condition of that moving heart soul, the author draws a voice to draw color ground, many angles to multi-layerly push forward and receives the best effect.3 people call to be called "all-powerful angle", but is exactly"all-powerful", in "draw near reader and the mental distance of story" this up, again not equal to first person.
The famous writer Mao shield specially worships a first person description method while speaking of short story creations, think that slicing a person like this is quick and saves pen and ink, a while drew in reader a story in, also easily make reader and author come close.
The success very great degree of 《the open space sinks into 》 lay in to choose the best description angle.The author described a home tragedy story with a tone of little boy.First, I-a little boy, give people with true authentic feel.He is in no hurry, the pleasing way comes and speaks that the mother gets sick, elder sister for help mother to sell organ and fail to the human body organ store.Father is helpless for the mother's disease, anaesthetize himself/herself with the wine, the elder sister hates to father, the mother dies, and afterwards father finds out "full of old woman Yi" and strives for "one go to an Antarctic work"-a words, tells this tragedy story with the child's innocent language, even have a strong atmosphere.Author have no directly write a father how silently dedicate the process of body for children existence, also didn't write father be misunderstood an in the mind by the elder sister how sad-these copy Xu, if write out probably will become creating unexpected complications of surplus pen and ink.Have never written these, let the reader consider:I see father's skin cover with on rich,www.beats4monster.co.uk, how shocked;I tell the elder sister father's secret, elder sister would ever repent the past Mo and.The work is wonderful to be leaving very great thinking space for reader, let him shed tears, enjoy in retrospect, deliberate.
Certainly, the first person description also has its weakness, be want to speak a complicated process not so convenient, is more especially difficult than to announce to public the heart world of others.For this, some authors then adopted first person and 3 people call to cross the way of use.But this demand brilliant structure technique.The author of cleverness must consider before conceiving outline to strive for an article and use what angle the description want to tell of the story would receive the best effect.
Four describe environment and atmosphere
Month black homicide night, breeze Gao sets fire a sky.
The month is black, breeze Gao is often the work that is some to have a breathtaking sex contents to establish of the environment and atmosphere of the typical model.Author to write into a best science fiction work while conceiving outline to strive for an article, must design environment and atmosphere.Can not conceive in the plain of densely populated locality, will perform "Wu Song Da's tiger" so breathtaking, grand view of live a play.
What 《heavy mist horn 》 writes is a dinosaur that the Jie looses to incubate in the deep sea, mistake while being the clarion call that it hears lighthouse another a suspect the dragon is calling.Hence, it overcomes a layer after layer difficulty and visits toward the lighthouse.Finally ruined lighthouse, disappointedly the Qian returns to deep sea.Author cloth thunder virtuous Bo Li choose the environment of story in an alone and helpless lighthouse and keep off land of icy cold of sea."In the work, lighthouse's light to project on all sides, the throat of lighthouse sends out shivering of heavy mist horn voice, coast 100 miles inside have no a town".The environment like this provided the best"satge" for launching of story.
What 《break a stairs 》 writes is a composer to return to with lover together living lead of small town, at full is a Huang grass, old broke to unexpectedly see the figure of lover in the villa ruins of Xiu.A breathtaking science fiction story then at the environment like this launched.The author again and again appears a breaking of terror stairs when details launch and made to like cushion for the murder of end.
To author, the importance of the choice environment compares to cricket fight, have to have a very small cage.
Have no cage, also have no urge two typical model environments that crickets fight each other, the thus hard display is fought a stories of derivation by the cricket."Cage" greatly was small.2 people fight on the flat ground, far not equal to at speed of train top, on the helicopter fight more fascinatingly.
The story background of 《devil triangle and UFO 》 is that the devil was triangle, originally was a mysterious unfathomable place, but many afterwards this typical model of the environment have been already been used over.As Chinese author, can with hide the northern unmanned area, absolute being agriculture in Hubei and building orchid thou country ruins the etc. is a science fiction story creation of"environment"?
When some authors of beginner science fiction writings are in "tell a story" very the inattention chooses environment.
For example write two
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